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Thursday, January 21, 2010

Jeff Gebert

Good topic
Good interview questions

fredell

good topic
nice stand up

needs more interviews

Lauren Goodell

Good topic
Well taken camera shots

a little long

Lauren Grotkin

Good topic
good angle

Interviews need more dynamic backgrounds.3

Betsy Hagen

Really good B-roll
Awsome transitions

nothing wrong that I could see

Heinen

Good topic
good transitions

a tripod could make the shots steadier

Ally Lawrence

Good topic
good transtions

Staedier shots would make it better
tony companion

Good amount of b-roll
funny interviews

transitions could be better
mike johnston
Comments: (What was done well? What improvements should be made?)
good interviews, interesting stand up, could have used more b-roll
sean collins
Is the topic relevant and interesting? Does it relate to our audience? 1 2 3 4
4
Is the story angle clearly defined? Is it unique? 1 2 3 4
3
Is the stand-up informative and creative? Does it lead into the story? 1 2 3 4
4
Are the interviews important to the story? Experts? Restate question? 1 2 3 4
4
Are transitions smooth and informative? Sequence makes sense? 1 2 3 4
4
Does the story make sense? Does the A-Roll drive the story? 1 2 3 4
4
Do the camera shots add to the story? B-roll? Correct shots? 1 2 3 4
4
Is sound used to enhance story? Music? Natural sound? 1 2 3 4
3
Is the editing clean? Graphics? Sound? Transitions? 1 2 3 4
4
Is the story the proper time length? 1 2 3 4
4
Total __38__/40

Comments: (What was done well? What improvements should be made?)
the transitions were smooth, the sound could be better
Is the topic relevant and interesting? Does it relate to our audience? 1 2 3 4

Is the story angle clearly defined? Is it unique? 1 2 3 4
3
Is the stand-up informative and creative? Does it lead into the story? 1 2 3 4
4
Are the interviews important to the story? Experts? Restate question? 1 2 3 4
3
Are transitions smooth and informative? Sequence makes sense? 1 2 3 4
3
Does the story make sense? Does the A-Roll drive the story? 1 2 3 4
4
Do the camera shots add to the story? B-roll? Correct shots? 1 2 3 4
3
Is sound used to enhance story? Music? Natural sound? 1 2 3 4
2
Is the editing clean? Graphics? Sound? Transitions? 1 2 3 4
3
Is the story the proper time length? 1 2 3 4
3
Total __25__/40

Comments: (What was done well? What improvements should be made?)
The scamera shots were still and stable. the sound could have been better